- Apr 10, 2023
- 684
- 1,330
___________________________________+++++++++++++++++___________________________________________so far I don't understand why they inserted Dal and Tim, because there will be more competition, and that will hinder the story as far as I see it
I don't know why you guys are arguing about these two, I liked their appearance in the story. Anna became even more naughty, she was a little excited by the situation. Now I'm interested in their next meeting, it has great potential to be very erotic and even sexy, depending on how liberated Anna is.___________________________________+++++++++++++++++___________________________________________
Timothy/Dale for now at least are plot tools.
During their intro they helped explain how vulnerable Anna is during erotic situations, so it helped define her character more. And it's a useful explanation when Anna will be confronted by Marvin and Grant. Hank doesn't need Anna's vulnerability as much to explain his interaction with Anna (upcoming) but am sure it will play some part. It's Marvin and Grant, who needs to have that vulnerability to get around the fact they are pathetic specimens of males.
The more realistic options of Chris, Jake, and Robinson for Anna have youth, personality, and character to bridge relationships
Does the story further need Timothy/Dale? No not really. Now they could help drive the cheating plot of the story if they are kept. Their best use would be some sort of catalysis that sets things in motion...think when the time comes with Anna staring over a cliff, Timothy/Dale are the shove that sends Anna off the cliff. Now if just used for some sex scene for GPs, Timothy/Dale lose their effectiveness as plot devices. Sure the sex scene might be entertaining to some extent, but if combined with plot/story development... wow!
Ironically a whole Timothy/Dale interaction with Anna's character development, would help with Marcel angle to the story if that is Mr. Palmer's intent.
View attachment 4550461
Her skirt is really short.
Guys, can someone post all the spoilers for this update in normal quality and size?
Wow. Thanks, I haven't seen some of them.
OMG they drink short after wine? There will be big trouble
kendra control jakeActually person who give drink is actually jake who mix in Anna drink sleeping pills to ensure she is nearly become unconscious both have plan to take her in empty room so jake make fun with anna
be careful with that, it is white, it is a sign that marvin will appear in the scene.
anna slow down kendra not so hard its soo hurtImagine if kendra will be first for Ana..all those including me who joined this VN hoping that there's no lesbian in here atleast. So no matter how much he troll, it won't be longer than LP...but if he include kendra/Ana scene lol...I will unfollow MP
_________________________________+++++++++++++++++++++_______________________________________I don't know why you guys are arguing about these two, I liked their appearance in the story. Anna became even more naughty, she was a little excited by the situation. Now I'm interested in their next meeting, it has great potential to be very erotic and even sexy, depending on how liberated Anna is.
Their hands were on her ass over her skirt, maybe next time they would be under her skirt or even on her chest. Given the premise, I think it's quite likely.
In my opinion, the appearance of these guys harmoniously expands the plot, makes it even more interesting.
We are not against tim and Dale..we are more like why other antagonist couldn't progress upto the point of time and Dale yet. Whatever Tim and Dale did in their first meeting with Ana, Jake couldn't do it even after his 100th appearance. I am more towards make some progress with those old characters...that would be more interesting because they're already involved in the storyI don't know why you guys are arguing about these two, I liked their appearance in the story. Anna became even more naughty, she was a little excited by the situation. Now I'm interested in their next meeting, it has great potential to be very erotic and even sexy, depending on how liberated Anna is.
Their hands were on her ass over her skirt, maybe next time they would be under her skirt or even on her chest. Given the premise, I think it's quite likely.
In my opinion, the appearance of these guys harmoniously expands the plot, makes it even more interesting.
Timothy and Dale have gone further than Jake. Think that is my only gripe. They came out of nowhere got touchy feely before a major antagonist. Every antagonist got a feel except him why not use a major under used antagonist. I never met you before but sure I will allow you to caress my ass and not throat punch you._________________________________+++++++++++++++++++++_______________________________________
There is no argument at all... just ideas how best Timothy/Dale could be used in the future
.
I don't know why you guys are arguing about these two, I liked their appearance in the story. Anna became even more naughty, she was a little excited by the situation. Now I'm interested in their next meeting, it has great potential to be very erotic and even sexy, depending on how liberated Anna is. assuming there is a bigger role either of them have at this point
Their hands were on her ass over her skirt, maybe next time they would be under her skirt or even on her chest. Given the premise, I think it's quite likely. See I think the point of the coffee break room with Anna and Timothy and Dale had to make a point about Anna. Now where I am from, a gal gets ass groped out comes the bear spray if they are lucky... Anna could have gone all DEFCON 1 on Timothy/Dale, but instead she got sexually flustered... and that is the point I think Mr. Palmer was making about Anna's character that goes beyond those two
In my opinion, the appearance of these guys harmoniously expands the plot, makes it even more interesting. It's rare that a plot devise has a bite from the front and a sting from the back... but those two, Timothy/Dale supercharged the game and put more things into play
It just comes down to how Mr. Palmer goes forward with or without Timothy/Dale
We are not against tim and Dale..we are more like why other antagonist couldn't progress upto the point of time and Dale yet. Whatever Tim and Dale did in their first meeting with Ana, Jake couldn't do it even after his 100th appearance. I am more towards make some progress with those old characters...that would be more interesting because they're already involved in the story
I am playing all love path for all antagonists. No hate against any antagonist. Ana will remain faithful towards all antagonists lol.
Your point of view is understandable, but the point is that in this way, through these two, the author showed us the result of what was happening to Anna. He showed us the level of her corruption, using a kind of provocation. We are used to certain heroes and the gentle development of events with them, to slow corruption. Now there has been a shot, after which the real race will begin and we will witness who will be the first and the last. Chris got Anna's mouth, now someone else will be there, and then maybe several at the same time. Hopefully, someone other than Chris will be the first on the next base.Timothy and Dale have gone further than Jake. Think that is my only gripe. They came out of nowhere got touchy feely before a major antagonist. Every antagonist got a feel except him why not use a major under used antagonist. I never met you before but sure I will allow you to caress my ass and not throat punch you.
MP dont even reply to those everyday who pay him every month. you think he's gonna reply to freebies who tag him everyday?
You're very welcome, my friendView attachment 4550461
Her skirt is really short.
Guys, can someone post all the spoilers for this update in normal quality and size?
Timothy and Dale have gone further than Jake. Think that is my only gripe. They came out of nowhere got touchy feely before a major antagonist. Every antagonist got a feel except him why not use a major under used antagonist. I never met you before but sure I will allow you to caress my ass and not throat punch you.
Na Leonard and Marcel still left beside Jake too..they didn't felt Ana yet.Timothy and Dale have gone further than Jake. Think that is my only gripe. They came out of nowhere got touchy feely before a major antagonist. Every antagonist got a feel except him why not use a major under used antagonist. I never met you before but sure I will allow you to caress my ass and not throat punch you.
And second point is characters relevant to the story...like I can understand MP wants to show that office guys are attracted to Ana new looks...he could have done that with Jake and Marvin with some jealousy where both of them try to grope Ana in the office..Your point of view is understandable, but the point is that in this way, through these two, the author showed us the result of what was happening to Anna. He showed us the level of her corruption, using a kind of provocation. We are used to certain heroes and the gentle development of events with them, to slow corruption. Now there has been a shot, after which the real race will begin and we will witness who will be the first and the last. Chris got Anna's mouth, now someone else will be there, and then maybe several at the same time. Hopefully, someone other than Chris will be the first on the next base.